All Comments on 'Bobby-Jack Pt. 02'

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bienclarbienclarabout 4 years ago
Burning hot as always

Excited to see what happens next! For part 3 please find adjectives without "sable" in them - getting distracted by hearing Santa Baby in my head every few paragraphs...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Oh Shit! Things just got complicated!

I have enjoyed this story from the start. I love the chemistry and attraction of these two reuniting after years apart! But obviously Clay got a bit ahead of himself with Bobby!

Who just crashed the party? Apparently Clay has someone already in his life! This is just to Hot to see it not keep going! Cliff hanger... hope to see the next chapter soon. I know its early but this story needs a HEA!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

"It's going to rip me apart, it's too fucking big!" Not when you are turned on enough it aint!

I hope Malcolm is a housemate or brother !!

RobJasperRobJasperalmost 4 years ago
Great second chapter!

Great second chapter with hot descriptions, the two guys so into each other and then the surprise at the end! Excellent work!

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Thomas A Hammer, writing on Literotica as "TAHammer" Living out in the country and writing stories of all kinds. I'm beginning to hesitate calling what I write here "erotica", preferring to call it "explicit gay (and/or bisexual) adult fiction" as some of my writing might b...

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