All Comments on 'Bobby-Jack Pt. 03'

Wow, Sorry to be critical of this long awaited chapter, but it seemed very rushed! Kind of disappointing!

We were left with a big surprising cliffhanger, this chapter should have started at that point!

Then the confusing part of wondering if Clay was getting married to Malcolm! This great story deserved a less rushed more detailed explanation of what the hell happened after Malcolm's arrival in the bedroom, and maybe how we got to the alter!!! You should rewrite something that comes close to the hot chapter two! Way to much was left out in an effort to get to a quick HEA!

why the rush ..am so not happy waited and waited and you give us this!! U know u could have done better right.

So much was left out

Hmmm….I agree with the other comments. Too bad to jump to marriage without anything after the guys being discovered by Malcom in bed. And no hot sex in this chapter…sigh.