All Comments on 'Bondage Burglar Ch. 01'

by TheFluffyX

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ProfDavrosProfDavrosover 4 years ago
Interesting

Interesting premise. Initially I felt a moral objection to the basis of the story. Then again fiction is fiction. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Needs punctuation

I would have given 5 stars if the story had some punctuation.

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