by Gunt6000
A little dirty and a lot HOT, just the way a good story about forbidden sex should be. Maybe next time, if there is one, instead of wearing it and only getting a leftover taste, Dad will feed the essence of life that created you by serving it directly down your throat.
Great story. I'm glad you slowed down and allowed the reader time to process the act between the two. Also your description of male noises during pleasure are on point, primal and conquering. The only suggestion I would have is to evaluate how you need to present dialogue in the story. The idea of a secret is good and I liked how you represented "marking/conquering" and the build up was very good. I think that's the best part, the great build up and how you packed it into a short story. The contrasts between the two male characters was also great. Good job. I will definitely add it to my favorites list.
Thanks Pitbull86, scargazer, MarcLuciFer and everyone else who enjoyed this it means a lot. Thanks for the suggestion Marc!
Fantastic story..Matter of fact beginning but little by little becomes just white hot..I’m married, closeted. A story like this makes me understand how gay I am. It made me hard, yet I know that if I read it again later, I’ll get hard again. Thanks so much for such a great story..Write more soon.
JT
Great story! I grew up with no father but had two uncles who guided me into man love. I had other family members love me in ways I will never forget.
OMG that was sooo freaking HOT!!! Very well done. 🤤 I’m going to give this story a rock hard 15 stars……
Once I finish with the comments I’ll have to change my pre cum soaked underwear…. 😈
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A fabulous story of the love between a father and his son. After ky mother caught me playing with myself a few times, she discussed it with my father. He then came to me and actually asked if I would like him to show me how to make my masturbation as fun and enjoyable as possible. I agreed IMMEDIATELY and that's how we began my "Masturbation Lessons"...
Dad and I watched Baseball and Football Games downstairs in the Basement. After each game we got naked and stroked our Hard Cocks sitting next to one another on an old Sofa that we found in my Grandmother's Flat. We both enjoyed it immensely and did it... OFTEN..!
He would say to my Mom: "We're going downstairs to watch the Game and then enjoy a "Lesson" or two. She knew what that meant and would smile at me and reply: "Okay you Guys... Have FUN..! SO MANY MEMORIES OF BATING IN THE BASEMENT WITH DAD..!