All Comments on 'Bookshelves tell a Story'

Good premise.

Sex rushed.

Three stars.

Pleasant. Somewhat erotic

All I can say is WOW! I'll dream about this tonight.

Loved the build-up and the sex was superb. She was a beautiful fucktoy.

I enjoyed the story but it was a bit of a struggle. I read the stories on my iPhone and perhaps it’s different when reading on a pc. I don’t know as I’ve never done it. But long paragraphs, and I don’t think I’m on my own in this, are off putting especially at the beginning of the story as in this one. Apart from that I can’t think of another criticism.

Very clever. Writing set scene, established characters. Suggest more dialogue to move story along. Did skim longer paragraphs. You lost me. Again, please know, very likable story. Definately EROTIC & AROUSING. Please write more ! Definitely 5 STARS !