All Comments on 'Born Into Darkness Ch. 10'

I'm a fan of Munchy. I love Kell and Roxana. The whole story is Fantastic. Can't wait for more.

Her name is P.C. Cast lol her use of profanity in one of her books refers to the greek gods gentials lol.

Im jot done reading yet though! Lol comment 2 coming shortly

I dont know! You made good characters so I like them all! Its all so cute!

Looking forward to reading chapters 11, 12, &13

Over the Hollidays!

No pressure or anything like that!!!

LOL

I plan to have at least ch.12 after xmas, it's finals week, sorry guys it's a little hard trying to write and balancing studying. But 12 and 13 will be up during the holidays for you to enjoy. As for right now i submitted ch.11 it's pending, i hope you guys love it i added extra for compensation for the long wait, sorry about that.

do like those whining bitches at columbia law school and ask for a delay because you are so upset at the furgeson thing and garners death in nyc.

Even Kell and Roxana act like an old married couple - LOL. And poor Dean is at Sophie's mercy.

BTW, what happened to Munchy in the fight outside the diner? And he suddenly materializes when Dean snaps his fingers? Love the dog too - so much like his master - fierce when he needs to be, yet a playful puppy all other times.

Not to nitpick - but FYI. I'm a professional writer and I noticed a few typos - which jarred me since they're the incorrect words.

Pg 1 - typo, should be "pus" meaning white colored liquid signifying infection, whereas "puss" is shortened slang for a cat or in other cases, a mouth

Pg 2 - typo, should be "rogue" meaning scoundrel or unreliable person whereas "rouge" is a red cosmetic

Pg 2 - typo, wrote both "Roxana" and "Roxanna"

Pg 2 - typo, should be "quiet" meaning no noise, not "quite" which is a moderating adverb.

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