by SilentSoul69
You wrecked the story with the sharing. Ayden was the true incest brother. He did not join in, he did not his sister cheating, and she was cheating, the bitch. But you kept our two sharing and that is just so much bullshit
The story rates a 1/5, a real disappointment.
I agree with wargamer. Seems so many brother sister stories get mucked up like that.
Hey everyone, I just wanted to say I've read your comments, and have taken them into consideration for future fictional stories. Thanks for the feedback.
Great story, I agree that bringing Kat into the mix didn't enhance the story. But in the end I found the story well written and worthy of a 5-star rating. It would be interesting to see this tale continue as I bet there would be a lot more to tell.
Wargamer messes 'it's up for us, again...
IF YOU DO NOT LIKE THE STORY(IES) HERE, KEEP QUIET AND MOVE ON!! NOBODY CARES THAT YOU HAVE EXPERIENCE WITH INCEST, OR WHATEVER!! Leave us to enjoy the reads, and you just go on your way, happily 'superior' to the rest of us!! (NOT!!)
As far as this series, again, it is 'weird'...but in a good way...wish there was more, too much has been said, and left hanging!!
Five Stars!! 🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋