All Comments on 'Bottles Ch. 02'

Okay, okay. You caught me. I lied. The sentence should be 'I absolutely want more.' Fortunately, patience is one of my strong suits. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I know you kinda have an aversion to finishing stories, as you said.

And if you feel the need to skip to something new, give this story some closure.

Even if it just is a "and then they all lived happily ever after"

MORE PLEASE.

Thanks for giving us this installment. What a great story so far. I would like to see them get to monday before you move to any of your current stories..., But this is your world and we are just happy to tag along as you move through it. Keep doing you. JT

Something you might want to try if you like to write infinite additions to a story. Write and present the "conclusion" as the introduction...

Isn't it about time to take this fuckable foursome out into mortal world? That sounds like fun.

Count me in for wanting more. This is one of the best genie series yet!

This seems like it could be an awesome story when it gets going. Please continue it!

This is a great start, lots of avenues to pursue, he can do philanthropy, lust, and other actions of light -- I would think you should avoid some of the dark possibilities, though some would be fun. Please keep on and let your readers enjoy you journey.

You've got a great thing going on here.

Make it happen, Cap'n!

Well done! And it's certainly very yummy too! Thank you!

Is it time to start involving others? The school, the kid that groped the girl and his family, the ex and her boyfriend...

Nice start, just needs for him to learn more as he lives in the real world. Must be lots of problems he can get into that they have to help him.

I am dying to find out about the last bottle...what is in it...if he can open it...will it be different?

Don’t stop!

So man possibilités...

Have fun with your story !

You said you like the subject.

I know I want more of this debauchery !

Go for it, me like !

5 good stars

Keep going!!!

You are a very talented writer. Please keep up the good work.

I enjoyed both chapters, and I am quite interested in seeing where you go with the characters. I hope you will write more of them.

OerldeWolf

Enjoying your share. Thank you

I really like the way consensual wish fulfillment is handled. Actually, I like everything about it! Would love to read more.

Love this story, and can’t wait to see where it goes next!

Tell us more

This is great!

I'm really liking the story so far, and I hope you continue it!

You've got a great story set up with these first 2 chapters, and I would love to see the story continue.

Very well written and informative with respect to the wish making rules...we definitely are looking forward to more chapters

This series fulfills the greatest fantasy I didn't know I had. I've already reread the first two chapters and I will patiently wait for any new additions to the series. Bravo.

This story is not even past the prolog in my opinion. There's been no interaction beyond sex and some discussion between themselves. Continue please and actually make something worth reading. Good luck.

Need more, more, more, as time and inspiration allow. Totally injoyed, plot, setting, flow, you have provided.

This is a great read, please do more when you are ready.

A good read 5 🌟.

Please sir may I have some more?

More is coming!

I've got a good chunk written now, but they haven't made it out of the house yet. :) I could publish now but I think I want to keep going until they've been out in the world a little first.

Really good story! Thanks so much!

One of the best I have read..more please!?

I’m enjoying it more... I can’t wait to see how creative you can get with the limitations of it.

My new favorite story on Literotica. I like it even better than the one I wrote for myself! As long as you keep publishing them, I'll keep reading.

So far So good. But he needs to be in public and let people see him and the different girls together. esp. his mother and his Ex. See the look on her face as she see's he has replaced her.

Please

Well done. I think what I really enjoy is the questions. The boundaries. Definitely looking forward to reading more in this story.

I have to ask... who are the porn star resemblances to the girls?

Not enough 💫 or favourite’s for this ...

Wonderful again!!! This chapter ended far too quickly though. MORE PLEASE!!!!

I want more

I could read this indefinitely and never grow bored. Your backstory, world building, and character conversational interaction is such a pleasure to get lost in. Thanks for all the effort you put into this.

⭐⭐⭐⭐

I’m really enjoying reading this story. I already knew how much I’ve enjoyed genie and djinn stories but most never get finished I’m really hoping you don’t screw your readers over like joebrollie.

So I’m begging please keep these chapters coming whenever you can to all your stories as I’ve really really enjoyed them all so far.

Wonderful story great imagination

I am enjoying this story immensely; the thought put into it, sharing, emotions, the whole fantasy thing. Helps me 'forget' about the world we live in for a bit.

One more chapter...🥺...wish there was more...

Five Stars...💥💥💥💥💥✨✨✨✨✨

I'd say you've laid a good foundation, but you have just let that foundation sit - for the last three years.

From what I can see the longer this story sits, then the longer it will take to make additional chapters fit into it. Your thought processes will have changed over time, and the longer this sits, the more you will want to tweak what you already have before adding new chapters to it, and that job will have grown as time progresses.

Just some thoughts I had on your story. Keep up the good work.