All Comments on 'Bottles Ch. 03'

More please. And it doesn't matter which series because they're all fantastic.

I would also like to see more of each of your series, but I like “Nowhere but up” the best and would love to see another chapter (or many more) added there.

I am enjoying the bottle series but id like it if Eric made their breast expand and or asses or both. Especially with Lyric really making her look like a fuck toy/whore. Also what happens if the women they are based off of run into them? That could be fun. Id also like to see his ex put in her place, nothing horrible. I am really loving this keep it up, and thank you.

You have great flow to your story lines. Any chance of Nowhere But Up to get an update. Divine Job Benefits as well. All of them really! Keep up the good work!

And i was glad to cum along.

Kinda derivative, old ideas and imagery trotted out again for our wanking pleasure.

I'd say that given the stated ambition, it succeeded.

I'd like to see what's going to happen with the fourth bottle. Presumably, Eric's going to meet just the right person to give it to, who will open it in front of Eric and his genies, and then, wow!

This has definitely been one of my favorite genie stories on this site. Please do continue the story I would love to see more

Awesome! Thanks for sharing your work. It is great to see where you are going, and how this will not have all the angst most Genei stories have. Me doing you. JT

I too have have been looking for something to fill that gap left when the Genie Chronicles ended back in '07 at the vacation house, but am glad I found your works. Being inspired by the works of Joe Brolly is something grand, but what you have done is taken the topic, made it your own, and stands apart from his. Please keep up the great writing and I look forward to their future adventures here and in your other works!

Simple as that. This is a great series and it simply must continue. Please!

I like this series a lot. You have the lighter mood, the fun sex, and some relationship building also. I am looking forward to later chapters of this series. And I always find the stories where the characters go out in the world to be among the most interesting. The contrasts between the characters and the mundane is a strong part of the draw for me.

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I enjoyed it very much and would enjoy you continuing the saga. Personally I don't need to see him with a lot of other women other than his genie's, but I would like to see him run into his ex wife with his girls. Good writing. Very good.

It sounds like Eric's life before the genies. really only included his mother. no siblings, or father. you did mention friends texting him, but nothing else really. If you vision the other bottle as a male pleasure genie, then maybe Eric could give that genie to his mother. This would do many positive things, allow Eric to share a long life with his mother (and the knowledge of the magic). As for the money stuff... why can't he wish for a lottery ticket, doesn't have to be the big jackpot even but enough to invest, to make him wealthy. just some ideas for you

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Please......

I think a little wish-fulfillment is a healthy fantasy in these times. Thank you for writing this!

Just amazing. Hope you write more of it.

Well they went shopping and got more then clothes. It will be interesting to see if anyone gets pregnant because of his daliances. Not the Genies but the other Ladies.

Your Bottles series is very entertaining. The sex-genie concept is, obviously, not original, but your take on it is. I really like what you're doing with it. I hate to nit pick, but your grammar is first rate (?). Bad grammar and poor spelling always puts me off. It helps when the reader feels like the writer is in charge. However, (here it comes) I think you missed a very short scene in the Trina episode in the dress shop. I believe there should have been three or four lines of dialogue between Trina and Becky when she returned to folding shirts after her dalliance with Eric in the changing room. This would have served to further cement the ways that Eric's Sex-Genie world connects with the real world. Also, the resulting Trina-Becky banter would have been comic.

One of your biggest strong points is not just the magic sex (which is wonderfully written, BTW), but the various ways the mundane L.A. bumps up against Eric's Sex Genie existence. Possibilities: Eric's small circle of friends, at least one meeting with the Ex (required), new sexual conquests, will he continue his job (please say yes), a public sex scene in the grocery store (not on the cantaloupes!), or even how his co-workers react to his new "girl friends". It's your world, go with it! Thank you for your story. Anxious to see your next installment.

And I must agree with Anon from 10/20/20 about where to go from here, Sounds awesome to me.

Ramjet57

Amazing work! I can only hope that chapter 4 will soon follow!

Please Cont. this story, I just love stories about Genies !

Take them to Vegas for gambling abd have them play the Lottery to gain some money for future expenses.

You could have the Lawyer and Principle have all of their evil come out publicly so that their lives are ruined.

Take us with you as they settle on the Beginning of their lives together .

And I liked it again, About bottle 4, his mom? Just a thought I had. And PLEASE keep writing in this series, I love it.

Very entertaining! Plz write more 'Bottles'.

Dearest wastelandwriter,

Please write more to this story. It’s truly one of those stories I’d hate to see fall to the wayside.

Thank you

PLEASE continue with this series!!! This has become one of my FAVORITE series.

Amazing concept! Now that the rules are laid out and there is some acceptance on Eric's part, future chapters can be dedicated to adventures and story, limited only by your imagination. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

Thank you, you created a new take on the genie genre. I absolutely loved it and hope you continue with this wonderful story. The possibilities are almost endless, I do hope there will be some excitement not related to sex but keep thats up to you the writer.

Come on, man, please continue this!

Looking forward to more of this one, both the storylines you mentioned as well as an answer to the "how am I going to pay my bills question, and maybe an encounter with the ex (ending embarrassingly for her).

Regardless, I've enjoyed what you've done so far.

His nom should get the last bottle

This is by far the best "Genie" storyline that I have read to date. Please continue this series.

Another awesome story. Thanks for writing it.

sexy story. I appreciate the authentic emotion.

That is the best genie story I have ever had the pleasure to read, bar none.

Continue pleaseeeeeeeeeee

Can you come back to this story? It was so gooooood

Please bring them back, maybe dressed in black leather, dominatrix style and boots...

I wish Eric wasn't such a drama queen. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Hi. A few thoughts. The genies were all very similar in their responses, so they remained mostly 2-dimensional characters, with very little to differentiate them. This was magnified by the fact that all three genies were Pleasure Genies. In other words, the additional genies did not really add anything. Finally, by making them genies, but limiting their abilities, the story devolved into how may different ways can the hero have an orgasm with 3 or 4 women. After you've done that a number of times, you've run out of story. Your construct was a one-trick pony, if you'll excuse the pun. If you had given the other two genies different abilities, then they would have powers where Eric could do things to help people, and the story would have expanded beyond his bed. Look up the story Malcubus for an example of a different twist on a standard character (Sucubus).

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2866452&page=submissions

The Raven Chronicles by SofBlack also has interesting twists on standard characters (but too many with too many story lines).

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4478803&page=submissions

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-raven-chronicles-ch-01

There's also A God Called Bruce by Talemaster has quite a few different characters again with interesting twists on a well-known genre and a great story line.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1196364&page=submissions

Tefler has one of the top series on this site with Three Square Meals, and is also very good at creating and managing multiple different characters and their story lines.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2967464&page=submissions

And probably one of THE best written stores on this site is God of Mischief and Lies, by FireFaery. Loki finds something he can't control. In just three pages, she reveals more about Loki than many authors who've written dozens to hundreds of pages.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1659737&page=submissions

Best of luck. PS: If you've not read it, find an on-line copy of "Save the Cat". It can be read in an afternoon.

need more of bottles

For wish fulfillment and an escape, it's unmatched. This series is unbelievably soothing. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

Great series - really do hope you continue this.

Many thanks for sharing with us all...

It would be good to see how Eric can be the teacher he wants to be, despite the politicking.

Oooohhhh...you nasty, nasty author...public sex like that...I have had a couple of girlfriends, years ago, who would not mind a go in a public venue...movie theater, roof of parking garage, public park(s)...some others. AND, always so much fun, quite the turn-on, especially with the chance of being caught right there!!

Another chapter, or chapters, would SERIOUSLY be welcomed by a lot of us readers; the content and quality of the works is obvious, and demands a follow-up!!

🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💯💯💯💯💯Five**5**Star story/series...PLEASE continue it...

What happened to all your other stories? This and Divine Job Benefits are the only ones left on this site.

More, pretty please?

I'm with Phantom14 on this one. Where are your other stories? I normally read Alien Vacation at least once per year. So sad to see it has been taken down.

Nice one! But will they go to a bar where Eric will be served a djinn & tonic?

Loved Bottles and Devine. Are you posting or selling your stories elsewhere that I can finish reading them? Please let me know.

Great fun, super hot. Like them getting to see this world.