by Avicia
Another great chapter. I particularly enjoyed the scene where the customs officer found all the BDSM sex toys.
I would like to thank MrSmith27 for his valuable feedback on an earlier draft of the story
Very well done; please continue. Perhaps the John Newton Society sends her undercover to expose other slave abusers?
If slavery is legal, will we be seeing blacks picking cotton again? And why would a slave become a doctor? That’s like telling us your dog is the mayor-it’s out of place. And why are there rules for slavery? That defeats the purpose of slaves-they’re not people, they’re property and no one gives a damn about what you do with your toaster.
So either slaves are people or they’re property but they can’t be both.
Great story line and great storytelling. You can tell how great it is by the positive responses you got from what I consider to be a couple of the other great authors for this type of story. I love Carls idea of the undercover operation for Erin. That would be fun. You have such wonderful characters they need to continue on for sexual adventure. And enjoy the back and forth of the girls telling their side of the activities. Cheers
Whackdoodle, (1) she was a doctor before she was enslaved (2) animals are property are you can be prosecuted for animal abuse; so, no, you can't do whatever you with livestock or pets
Chevalier237, MrSmith27 referred to popular slave romance novels by Hilary Rodham. I have a slave to lover romance in the works.
Would love to read more of the Erin story. Please, please please write more.
Yours truly,
Bellinda
This entire story started off real good and then got even better. Love to read more about Erin, but possibly also others that would fit in the story line. Bravo!
Liked the story Racheal feels more like an afterthought would like to hear more about both.
Earned a favorite, despite a slightly weaker start. The theme of anti-slavery organizations is a good one, that I have not seen addressed before. Definitely interested in more, especially the underground-railroad side of things. The story as a whole had interesting characters, imaginative situations, and good descriptions.
You have built an interesting world. I would love to find out more about it in your characters and your prose.
Of course I want to read more. You created these characters and now they live in our imaginations, so we are naturally keen to hear how their stories finally end.
Much enjoyed this story, I would love to read Mia's story you referred to in Chapter 2 Heather's Story!