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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

your style is fucking awesome this is primo shit

DannyeightDannyeightabout 2 years ago

This is a great concept and it forms the foundation for a great story, but it's your style of writing that really makes this submission into the erotic, captivating work of art that it is. The vocabulary, the flow, the cadence - these all conspire to make the act of reading just as pleasurable as the story they convey. I can only aspire to this in my own works.

Roukeadams07Roukeadams07over 1 year ago

Great description. More of this please!

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I'm new here. I've been writing smut for about a year, but I never planned to post any of it. A friend insisted that my work was pretty solid, so... here we are to see what the community at large thinks. Hope you all enjoy.