by Brady018
I think this is one of the greatest stories I have ever read on here and look forward to each new chapter. Thank you for the consistent and slow build up. You have a deft handle on making it believable and you don't rush the story. I have read all of your chapters and look forward to Chapter 17.
As long as you are shifting categories, how about some bdsm spice? Collar? Cuffs? And then have a few "friends" drop by that knew Dafni in her previous life.
Boring! How about something believable, like he had enough and it was time to get rid of Bray and take his chances with the brother's. You know, and actual story with believable facts a man held captive would call on.
The, thinking all tough and angry", then acting as a pussy is getting old. If he doesn't like it, do something about it. When does it turn into an actual story?