All Comments on 'Bound Ch. 01'

You did write it very well. And it captured my attention actually quickly. But i will have to suggest, that next time you write for this story..chapter(s) should be longer than this. My opinion is that it was to short. But other than that, it was a good start, and i do hope you will write more chapters.

It should definitely be longer. I'll be looking for the next chapter, though :)

I assume that the next part is to tell how much the woman loved being RAPED--Enjoy your hard prick---Creeps

Keep up the good work. I do agree that the chapters should be longer. Just so you know a "page" on Lit is about 3,000 words.

Oh yeah, ignore the troll. He is just another no name no balls little boy.

Mike S.

You have a great start for this story. I agree that it's a little short...but... it was long enough to make me want more...so, I think it was successful. lol

I'll echo one of the comments above -- very well written, but too short to gain momentum. Your writing is definitely engaging, but at this length it's more a tease than a story.