All Comments on 'Boundaries'

A great first go, I do get a lot of pleasure from reading emotive script such as yours *smiles* Hope you can share more of your fiction and that some of them turn into reality for you.

A very nice start to a writing 'career' I'd say! Please continue!

I enjoyed this. Thanks. Nice vignette... seems believable. Ending is a bit abrupt... how wet was her face after you pulled off ?

I really enjoyed your story -- very creative, sharp, and hot.

Pretty nice writing foir a first effort! Let's see some more, whether a continuation of this story or another one.

I really appreciate the time you took to leave me some feedback, and I do agree that the ending does feel very rushed.

Love from,

mostlyintact

I really enjoyed this. Very hot, I liked how genuine it felt, and the gentle use of humiliation. It's a shame it ended so quickly, though.

Excellent job. I really love D/S when it is written well and this was very enjoyable. This is the kind of erotica I wish I could read all the time.

This is lovely, thank you. :-) MMmmmmmm

Great story!

This was obviously written by a man. Gross

i loved the way you wrote i got a great understanding of the feelings between the principles good stuff