All Comments on 'Boy and Mummy Pt. 01'

fantastic start bro...

I AM A BIG FAN OF YOURS AND I HOPE THIS WILL HELP YOU GET YOUR FORM BACK. JUST TRY TO KEEP THE WRITING SIMPLE LIKE THIS, INSTEAD OF COMPLICATING THINGS FOR YOURSELF.

Superb

What Happens Next ? Update fast

Very good story mr.Bruce

finish a story beforr starting a new one

1/5

EXCITING Start .

HELLO

Good to see you back here

part 2 please

"to be continued..."

seriously?

again???????????????

Don't bother with a second part.

Gets a bit fractured making for difficult reading . . .

WAITING

thumbs up dude

The writing style of a drunk child, still wearing diapers to school.

Nice quick read

Capitalization conventions exist for a reason. If you're going to defy them you need an even better reason. When I saw "Easy-Fitting Bottoms" I thought "oh, maybe it's going to be a parody of advertising", but it wasn't, and by the end it was just "every word is capitalized whether it makes sense or not".