All Comments on 'Boy and Mummy Pt. 02'

This is hot

Very good follow up

Wonderful

Keep them coming bro

put this effort into completing stories you have kept pending

Wow

Luvd it

Part 3 soon please

ARE ALL INDIAN MOMS SUCH SHAMELESS SLUTS!!!!!!!

Try to get conversation without continually placing the name of the speaker at the left/start.

Much of that which you might consider dialog is, really, disjointed and somewhat confusing.

This chapter is simple everyday sex . . .

will you write the next part ? just anxious

This is screwed up. I thought after the first part you would have corrected all the capitalisation errors. Or are you just making a list of all the titles and sub-titles in Literotica and trying to weave them into a tale?

Are all Indian writers this bad at it?

cant wait for 3rd prt

Quit trying