All Comments on 'Boyfriend's Fantasy'

fag cuck shit.

Since it looks like there’s a second chapter coming, but it was just poorly written. Gave it a 1.

Bless you for writing a good hot wife story,Thats why we come here.Hope to read more from you and soon.

Hubby get to play third wheel

He gets a few licks to his dick, 3rd rate BJ if even that

He gets a dead fish cunt to finish in

She wants him to suck cock

To me it looks like hubby is on the way out

Pretty soon he will not be invited, and maybe get scraps when she gets home

An editor would help your writing immensely. The story has a nice theme and I would encourage you to write more but you need an editor's assistance going forward.

Who is we? Speak for yourself . Not everybody comes here for garbage. Some of us would actually like to read a story, a concept you're most likely not familiar with.

Maybe gay ones will love that crap!!! Why dont you put it there??!!

A bad story...and even worst using the second person...Then comes the question: Who are these people? So not one good aspect in it...1*

fag cuck shit.

The writer did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some mental illness mixed with some gay issues and some cuckold issues that were transported to this pathetic story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

1* for this ugly and nonsense story.

It felt rushed. The characters weren't well developed. We never got any hints at motivation except for general horniness. But most of all there was no emotion. It was rather bloodless.

Blah.

It was kind of like the outline of a story.

A non married gay prick doesn't make a LW story.

The husband must have been truly desperate for cock to allow his wife and her lover to treat him like shit on their shoes. Hey, he got to put a penis in his mouth before that same genitalia was a major factor in his cuckolding. His self esteem and the respect of his wife were small prices to pay for the ecstasy of having that cock pass through his lips. He would no doubt gladly give his life for one good fuck from that glorious phallus.