All Comments on 'Bra Fitting and more'

Good premise.

But rushed. Really rushed.

And you really need an editor. Lack of use of punctuation iver and over again is most annoying/disconcerting.

Not nearly enough foreplay/preliminaries before hand enters panties.

Three stars.

More please

Too short and not enough insight into the pregnant woman's thoughts. The need to be submissive part did not work out. This is the non-consent category, no? But please continue and amend this hot story.

I have you 2* and I have to agree with the previous commenters. Your characters were interesting but there was literally no description of them. No proper dialog, no thoughts, details on previous experience, even slight connection or back story or real struggle and the sex scene(s) was/were treated poorly. Take some time and maybe rewrite this, it has good potential.

that was amazing

Nice nipple description (dark thick long). Hopefully, when she goes back to the store, we will get to hear more about Sarah's gigantic untrimmed full bush that she cant reach because of pregnancy, to trim or shave herself. Possibly the lady at the bra shop will help her with that, very slowly and seductively by coming to her home.

Very erotic

Please write q continuating story or supplement

What's wrong with a quick change room session? I thought it was erotic and look forward to more stories about the two characters.

Love this..

I am so turned on by lactating women