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Prairieboy3gWMPrairieboy3gWM7 months ago

"It was then that Malcolm's breath became labored.....". Who the fuck is Malcom???!!! PROOFREAD MAN!!!!!!

notemalenotemale7 months agoAuthor

I accept the criticism but....

In your comment about Chapter 6, you claimed that you would not read further but here you are commenting on chapter 7.

Who the fuck is Malcolm???!!! Well, if you read the story, you would have seen that he was an invite guest. READ MAN!!!!

Again, thanks for the feedback, just try to be honest and accurate.

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