All Comments on 'Brad's Road Trip Ch. 11'

Both of your series are incredible! Btw, I think I know Kelly's secret, but I won't give it away.

Thank you for your efforts,

Jim

I'm curious about both Kelly's "mystery" and Brad's little packages to her. It was cool to see Brad on the receiving end of one of Kelly's stories for a change, too. :)

I'm going to need a chart to keep track of names and locations!'

I want to keep reading but I've got to the end. Please write more soon. Great story! Wonderful relationship between Brad and Kelly. Can't wait for Brad to get to her.

im pretty sure i speak for all your fns. we need more brad and kelly

Loving this series and waiting for more!

keep it up. you should actually tone the stuff down and try and publish more mid-stream (online). Your sense of humour is good as well as the way you plot your way through the nonsense.

I would really like to see Arron , brad's cousin have his own story.

I'm all for equal opportunity. But I can't help being disappointed that Kelly picked up and fucked a stranger the day after she and Brad began trading the b/g words (boyfriend, girlfriend). That's certainly not very egalitarian or understanding of me, but there it is. Sigh. Brad, you are a better man than I.

You already suggested the most interesting characters yourself.

This one back to 5*, although i did scroll some..