All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 07'

Rolling right along nicely! Thanks for sharing your work. Def looking forward to more chapters ....longer chapters would be good.

All very similar in story structure to “Vox Dominus” and there’s nothing wrong with that per se. The problem is that 7 chapters in and still no sexual progression for the protagonist leaving a portion of you readers disappointed. And what about the woman in his head?