All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 13'

by PriestOfIshtar

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TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFakeabout 3 years ago

That was unexpected. I thought he would go share his thoughts and worries with Maddy and she's push him away for the rape of the other woman at night. Seems she was influenced by her roommate that it was all some kind of trick? Then that woman at the union, And she didn't have a boyfriend. I want more Maddy time. She seemed like the perfect paramour. This story is interesting, going in directions I hadn't imagined.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Ok, while I have enjoyed these chapters immensely, that one got me. I didn’t expect that at all. I thought maybe she was only into women but I never considered a husband. Thanks for laugh. I love and appreciate every laugh I can find and especially in these stories.

J.D.

ZeroCrossZeroCrossabout 3 years ago

I hope this is only the temporary setback for Maddy. It'd be a waste to get rid of the only other character we've seen much development of, and it feels really out of the blue.

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