All Comments on 'Branded by the Sun'

Brilliant

Looking forward to next episode!

when they get skin cancer from the sunburn in later life, very amusing

Great idea!

When the women untied the men so that they could "stake them out"? The men stood up and beat the women unconscious. End to story. As for the "branding"? You do realize the sunburn will heal and go away right? Poorly thought out drivel.

1 star

You should writte a hall storie with this 5 chapter at least how they got enslaved how is the day to day how the hall weekend goes

It only lacked a reason for the girls to "brand" the boys. If the boys were being "branded" for some prior offense, that would have made it more fun.

You have a wonderful writing style and imagination.

I cannot believe the comments below, skin cancer??, boys beating up the girls??, they completely miss the point of femdom relationships.

I do not, I have been sexually driven by (voluntary) submission all my life.

I particularly enjoy summer fun, boats and bikinis, where the girls tease and the boys please.

I rarely comment, but your work deserves praise.

Keep writing! I'm a fan!

Sissy171

Before I read this, based on the description of the story, I thought they would use a magnifying glass to focus the sun's rays to brand them. This was cleverer. Well done.