All Comments on 'Break-In Ch. 04'

the husbands were all set up but for different reasons

Ju8streading may be correct. My big takeaway though, is that Savannah Fineman is going down. And I don't mean on a man or woman. Well, she may do that too, but I'm speaking of her career and possibly jail time. 5/5 as always. And a big 'screw you're to the scumbag MSM.

Dewey Cheatham

That’s a dirty trick ending without a solution! :p

I guessed Marla being pregnant with Toms child. My dilemma is that I’m failing to see how that translates to any motive for her to set him up to be killed. I’m sure the answer is there, I’m just not seeing it.

Geeze ur killin me. What no trial ending ? Another great story. Cant wait for the next installment. Ur work is always enjoyed n appreciated.

Savannah is a paid lacky of the 'Swamp Frogs'. Mirium will try to cover her ass and to look as if she has come to the correct decision, But the I/C is aware of Cindy and her talk as Miss Peabody is the I/C grapevine in that area.

Mrs Houge is a suspect of particular interest as she detests anyone who does not follow her ideals. She will snuff her own Husband to show she expects nothing but pure submission to her and her alone. I feel that, without 'proper data' she thought that Stanley would shoot his wife and Tom whome she could not control and so be it if Chuck got injured, All good for the devorce and the cash she would gain form both directions. As we know .

Marla was not liked by eitherof the partners wives and she was a long time lover of Tom and felt her Husband could be shot by Tom who would save her from her husband who went overboard on a little sexual role play. So Tom shoots Stanley and Chuck and wounds Marla, and said he overpowered Stanley etc etc.

Yes all without proper data and thankfull never had a case like this whilst involved with Law Enforcement. Had many like Claire and a couple like the I/C Angles who looked after me (I always turned up with good coffee and cakes)

Another 14/10 double cheeseburger and double 5*.

Can not wait for Savannah amd her DA to get their come-up-ence (Crowbar Version).

Iceman

Marla & Harriet . Both snakes in the grass . Separately guilty . Stanely may be guilty . It will be hard to prove .

I love this story and await the next installment.

I am concerned that while I was traveling Climate Injustice came out but is no longer available on the site. I hope you are able to resubmit.

Thank you

Wayne

Sooo, will the next installment actually resolve the case? Because I am actually a bit disappointed. 4 Chapters and no plotline was resolved. Stanley Locklear was not resolved, the feud between the D.A office and the police was not resolved and I dont know if anything in-house needed to be resolved but it seems like there is a lot of tension. So yeah, 4 chapters without anything substantial left me rather empty, sadly.

WW, I'm becoming concerned. Are you ill?

Okay, I keep getting emails from "Anonymous", to which I cannot reply because there's no return email, asking when I'm going to post the next chapter of 'Break-in'. READ THE LAST PARAGRAPH! This WAS the end of 'Break-In', and the trial of Stanley Locklear will be part of future story!

Also, I am getting tired of people who think they are ENTITLED but post as 'Anonymous' making a subtle demand that I post IMMEDIATELY by asking if I am ill. Yeah, I'm sick all right... sick and tired of the ENTITLEMENT attitude of Snowflakes.

P.S. Patreon patrons have the right to complain, but should do so on Patreon, not here.

good storhy and I M nonynura as I lost my id. reADERS SHOLD REMEMBER YOU TOLD US 30 Days we could expect somethng and yoju have been very consistent but a few times gaVE US SOMETHING SOONER. THANKS FOR EVERYTHING, SORRY AT 85 DONT TYPE SO GOOD ANYMORE.

Alright I admit it; I glossed over a few words at the end of the story. Like many others I was stupidly waiting for Break-In Chapter 5. That's on me. Good story, I would think it's unfinished, but it is the author's license to end where they end. We the public look forward to as many stories as you are willing to write, in your time frame of course. I often post as anonymous because I don't harangue the author but do make the occasional observation and conclusion based on precedent. I've even asked if author's are okay or doing well upon occasion, when it appears that they don't post in their average periodic rate as if life doesn't spring up and lay waste to best laid plans et. al. So, doing well WW? Hope life is good, and we'll see ya at the next published item, whenever it might be. - Cheers, Anon.

The first chapter of the next story, "Deliver Us From Evil", has been submitted.

Paying Patreon patrons (Level 1-4) will receive the story tomorrow (11/1/22) morning. I will be posting the stories to Patreon first. Click on the Contact tab and click "Webpage" to reach my Patreon site.

Stay tuned for more announcements.

A tad disappointed that the Locklear case was not resolved but it is the writer's perogative to defer it. A lot of issues coming to the fore and so much confusion or obfuscation concerning many characters; was hiring Clare a huge mistake, why does Joanne keep making the same mistake case after case, why does Cindy keep challenging Don, etc. About the only ones you can be sure of are Don, Griswold, Teresa and probably some of Don's kids.

Great writing, another 5 ⛤

I've been around longer than my fair share, and have met a number of people like Claire. In the literary world it may be possible to mend them. In the real world I have never met one who could be changed. They blunder through life causing chaos and angst. You can learn to tolerate them, stay away from them, or let them give you ulcers.

As usual, a great story well worth a 5

Think Claire is lacking some crowbar attention like she got when she came back.

I would address the Anonymous commentors who lay cheap shots at WW. If you are going to leave a negative or sarcastic comment under Anonymous give WW a chance for rebuttal. In the past I have used Anonymous but put a name to the comment if you want an answer to question. WW is doing the writing for you free of charge. I’ve read from Todd and Melina to now Break In and all the comments following each story/chapter. So be respectful to WW.

*****Thanks for the read.