All Comments on 'Breakdown Ch. 05'

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Taterbug7396Taterbug7396almost 9 years ago
Great story!!!!

Would love to read more of this story.........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please please

More !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved It!!!!!!!

I am so glad you decided to continue this story. And would love to see more of the 3 of them cont. in another series of stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice

Well, you took a bit of a break since your last chapter. I liked this one though. You kept the ideas flowing and the story moving. Not to mention the obvious things. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

Skate

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