All Comments on 'Breaking & Entering Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice to see you posting parts as quickly as possible..looking forward to read more..keep posting every few days

aamitomarbandhuaamitomarbandhuover 2 years ago

Too good story. Hope you continue further. Waiting for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's clear that the author is a virgin man whose only information on sex is from porn . There is no way a man can stay that hard for that long and that too after multiple ejaculation..

Also getting a woman to orgasm is much tougher than a man . She can't have keep having one after another etc.

Double penetration is not easy,it's more of a circus act. It's not easy for normal women to achieve them.

I hope you get a better idea of what 'real sex' looks like and it's nowhere close to porn

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Superbly written just too good one of my favorite writer is back with a Bang!!!!

Some how I feel Rohan will be back home soon as he must be trying to reach Naina over call

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

While you are at it, please finish the "french connection" series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your writing is good but the premise of the story isn't. I can't help but notice a pattern here. Hindu women with Non Hindu men. invariably the Hindu man isn't as big, as good, as muscular as the non Hindu. It's getting a bit passe and obvious now.

I thought you were better than the tariq zia's and the marcus aurelius of the world but sadly you are following the same done to dumpster themes like them.

None the less your best job was the The new car do continue with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pls don't stop it as two part series..need more...i come every day to check whether you added another part to it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please i want more of blacked in goa series

cdman55cdman55over 2 years ago

Nice part2. Naina is falling hard for the two brutes who is flaming her carnal desire

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Eagerly waiting for next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice story. Please continue. Also finish French connection and blacked in Goa.

indian_exec2000indian_exec2000over 2 years ago

This story is not up to the high standard of your earlier stories Remarkable Phase, New Car, Blacked in Goa etc. The Sex is repetitive and hence boring. Too much gratuitous violence is a big turn-off. C'mon Bdrew86, you can do better than the this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story

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