All Comments on 'Breaking And Entering With Steele Pt. 11'
by GabrielInkabus
- 11 Comments
Anonymous5 months agoYou know, I normally come to this sex story site to read sex stories. And yes, the sex here was hot, but damn if I haven't started looking forward to the story itself. I go back and forth over who is the bigger POS, the lying criminal douchebag dad, or the lying manipulative psychopath Melody. Great tale; keep it coming please. 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
Anonymous5 months agokeep it going but the sooner you can get something done to Melody that writes her out of the story the better
Anonymous5 months agoNot a fan of seeing GD used in every paragraph, but I LOVE this story. Can't wait till the next chapter!
Anonymous4 months agoYour story has a lot to tell yet. Carry on with this story and bring it to its actual conclusion.
Don't pay too much attention to earlier comments.
Anonymous4 months agoLove to keep reading the series, but it appears there's nothing new in the works so I will have to find a new series. Hopefully the writer gets over their writers block and can continue this. I will check again for new chapter's later but I've almost given up hope for forward momentum on the story at this point
Anonymous4 months agoEven though I wrote a less than stellar comment awhile back, I still look every day for the next chapter of Steele OR Mackenzie. Come on, redeem yourself!! Please.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoI'm waiting patiently for the next few chapters because I am curious about what is gonna happen when candy gets back
Anonymousabout 1 month agohow can you write 11 chapters then just drop off??Its been 4 months since last chapter FINSH THE DAMM STORY
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