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Click here"That's a good little bitch, see how easy it is to please me, no matter what" she said as she played with his caged cock with one hand and rubbing on his body with the other.
"Ya" he said in a defeated tone.
She clinched his cage tight twisting it... "That's not a proper response but you will learn."
Pushing his back forward her strap on slid out of his ass as she stood up. Eric fell to the ground. She slid out of the harness, and went and grabbed a bag as Eric laid his head down kneeing on the ground. As he heard the sound of metal clanging she said
"Now I'm going to display you, we get to stretch you out a little and teach you to some humility and how to listen."
Eric felt more cold steel & more pressure on his already beat up ass. He felt one ball from the anal hook enter him as he gasped. As she push the new hook into him he felt the ball at the tip approach the tip of the hook already in his ass. The new hook had a second steel ball that began to push inside of him right as the 2 tips of the 2 hooks fought for room in his ass. There were so many different sensations he couldn't focus on any one. The mix of pain and a weird sensation of pleasure bounced back and forth. After she had the second hook fully inserted in him it, the tip of the new hook in deeper than the first she attached a heavy chain to it and draped it over his shoulder.
Jess pulled in the chain that hung over his shoulders commanding him to follow her. She led him over near the wall and had him stand up. She clipped the cuffs on his wrists to the chains that hung down stretching his arms in a Y above his head.
"On your tippy toes" she instructed as she pulled the hook into him deeper.
As he got onto his toes she clipped the chain that was attached to the anal hook to another chain hanging from the ceiling. His predicament meant that if he lowered himself off his tippy toes he would be hanging from the hook in his ass. She checked to make sure the other hook was firmly attached to the back of his gag so he couldn't lower his head. She wanted him on display and for him to see anything that may be happening to him.
Jess strapped a leg bar between his ankles ensuring he wouldn't be moving anywhere far.
"Now that your nice and locked in, think I will enjoy your body a little. Give you a glimpse at what will happen if you decide not to listen to me again, if you don't address me the correct way again" she grinned and landed a slap across his face. "Hope you're comfortable because you will be there for a little while."
Eric just accepted his fate, after all, his hands were tied, legs strapped, gag in his mouth, cock caged and TWO hooks in his ass all pretty much ensured he didn't have a choice but do just let her do whatever she wanted. She took out some lipstick and wrote Jess's bitch across his chest, than ran it across his lips just for fun. He wiggled as if to object to the red lip stick on his lips for a second. She reached down and grabbed a set of nipple clamps on a chain and pinned them on both his nipples.
"That won't do" she said as she reached and grabbed some Bengay while he struggled.
She squeezed some into her hands and grabbing his balls, pulled his balls toward her and lathered them with it.
"This will let you think why you never should object."
He felt the cool sensation but was fearful of what to come in a few minutes. Jess loved this sight. Looking at this strong man, so helpless, broken. Knowing after a couple hours he will be puddy in her hands, be an affectionate lover, tending to her needs and wants without asking.... And when he doesn't she can quickly correct that.
She took some more photos of her art. Than went and set up the for the second half of their day while he was settled there helpless, having his ass stretched slowly.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months ago"puddy in her hands"? "you could of"? "your", when it should be "you're'?
Did you go to school at all? Please stop writing. You just shouldn't.
joela_99yover 1 year agoI loved the story and yes some of it was a little out there, but hey it's fiction.
My only minor complaint is the grammer and some wrong tenses and pronouns. I think a rereading before publishing or asking an editor to review woud have made it perfect, or course i did give it a 5* any way.
Prof_Masterover 1 year agoHmmm, what part of *fantasy* don't these folks get? Plus, I don't know what "BDSM people" you talk to, but as one myself, I can tell you these scenes are pretty tame, the sense of control and expertise the Domme exhibits are well written, and the consent is *obvious. Well done, Mistress, a 5.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThis is just sexual abuse, no man who isn't already incredibly submissive would ever go along with this
Anonymousover 2 years agoThe hooks are a little far out. You want to dominate him, not send him to the hospital!
Anonymousover 3 years agoNot sure if you're still here, but this is far too extreme for someone just testing the waters. This is how you can permanently cause physical and psychological trauma to another person. While you had me in the beginning, you lost me near the end of the first page.
I also believe that you forgot who really holds all the power here in theses relationships, because it's not us (Dommes/Doms) it is the subs and slaves. They say "stop" and we will HAVE to stop. Otherwise it's rape and abuse.
You started out strong, but ended terribly. Work on the endings.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI’m not really into such extreme pain & I certainly don’t understand how any normal man would willingly submit to this sort of treatment.
There are a couple of points I’d like to make. Please get an editor to check your stories before uploading, as there are quite a few mistakes in grammar and spelling.
Having spoken to a few people who claim to be into BDSM, they all say that limits are discussed and set before a “scene” starts.
A system of safe words is agreed upon and if used, the scene must pause or halt immediately. If a gag is used, as here, so safe words are in effective, then an alternative procedure should be agreed. Either a buzzer or dropping a small object as a sign to stop are often used.
This is just sadistic torture and if she is careless enough to release his hands, he will without doubt, maim or kill her.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoIf that was just the first part of the day he will be dead by the end. No man would willingly subject himself to this rubbish. Seriously ?
Anonymousabout 5 years agowith "breaking and training" men. But the only guys who'd even half way go along with it are those who are already submissive. Any other guys would run a mile or attack you or report it to the police as abuse. Nonsensical garbage
