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Click hereShe was already the cock-craving slut, this type of training usually created. I was pleased. As soon as the news accounts of Millie's disappearance ended, she would move to my bed in the main house.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoShe is playing you. As soon as she convinced you she was your devoted slave she would bust you in the head and you would wake up tied up in that dungeon listening to that tape until you rot to death. As least I hope that is how real abductors wind up. Great story though, the sex kept me wet.
ready52over 5 years agoGreat story, pity it had to end. I would have liked to known what he did with the whore.
betathingover 6 years agoOne should begin with telling you what I didn't like, what you should have done, or where you missed. Assigning points to each of those items, the total would be subtracted from 100 the result being your score. That has been completed. Your score is 100.
It is indeed well done, properly written and constructed. But since I am greedy and selfish, all that matters to me is if I enjoyed it. I did.
Very well done, my good fortune to find it. I will look at your profile and hope to find more. If I don't, please write more.
Anonymousover 8 years agototally believable; guy picks up a girl on the roadside and she becomes his fuck slut at the drop of a hat
sarcasm alert
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoPlease continue to right this amazing story of the Breaking and Training of this whore.
kiwiplumover 11 years agoYou have the hot story but it's very stiffly told and you give her zero personality so that takes a lot from the excitement for me I'm afraid.
Anonymousover 12 years agoOh my god this story made me cum like 5 times!!! Thank you so much! I cant even sit my clit is so jumpy!!! Write more!!!
dani_girlover 13 years agoI've been reading through your works. I came across the one titled A Sex Slave to Slaves, and I was officially hooked. While your stories are wildly imaginative and sensual, they are also amazingly well written. As an avid reader who comes to Literotica only for the erotica side of her interests I wish to say that you are probably the best author on Literotica. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Oh, and if you have a minute could you please finish "A Honeymoon That Would Never End?"
dani
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI've read maybe two other stories of this caliber on Literotica, and none of them quite so.. I don't know how to explain it. As a man who only came to know BDSM through an ex girlfriend, I spent some time searching for a way to get into it. After awhile, it thrilled me on every level. I've read countless stories on it on here and several other places. I've also looked into many Nc/r stories on here. None of them match this. As a writer you have quite some talent and as mentioned before, you should look into other avenues for it aside from erotic works. Anyway, long winded comment aside, great work.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWow. It was going along so well. I was enthralled with the story. Then you just had to bring drugs into it. That ruined the entire story. It had such promise until the moment the mention of pot came into the picture.
YourLittleAngelleover 15 years agoThe gradual build up, Millie's ever-increasing submission, and ultimate climax totally delivered. Please continue this fabulous story. The dynamic between the characters and story arc was fantastic, and I think my tension rivaled that of your male character as he gradually transformed Millie from a staunch, conservative, and "respectable" young woman to a goddess built for just one thing. Very well done!
Anonymousover 16 years ago...are a sick sick person. But one hell of a writer. Very good work, one of the best Nc/R stories around.
Anonymousover 16 years agoMaster and this girl read this story together, and it gave us much pleasure. So much that he used this slut well and often! A girl asks for more writing of this caliber, and thanks Master Orexis for a wonderful story.
