All Comments on 'Breaking Anna'

by Jorvik1220

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Your little personal intro at the beginning was a bit petty and narcissistic, and there are many spelling mistakes, but otherwise this is a good story ;)

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites11 months ago

Close to a great blackmail story, but the blindfold got lost toward the end. Well written, but poorly edited. I give it four stars.

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I'm into a pretty wide range of this. Always looking for the next thing I haven't tried! I'm typically on the "dom" end of the spectrum, but that's not a rule. I write a bit on here as well. Let me know if you enjoy any of the stories! I mostly RP here but I frequently switc...