All Comments on 'Breaking Even (750 words)'

Nothing erotic here. A 2 star 'dislike'. The only reason it isn't a 1 star 'hate' is because I can't hate such a sad, sad scene.

Wife and I did that once

I have had three different GF that worked as Hookers. Debbie, Evon, and Michelle. Tho I had a lot more that just gave pussy away behind my back. LOL Good Writing. Good Story. Hooker Fantasy is fun. 5 stars thanks.

A nice story that tells more than what's on the surface. Very economical and good writing. And for those who don't find it erotic, there are degrees of eroticism. One aspect that gets overlooked is what happens when the fantasy grows stale and the erotic becomes commonplace. Kudos to the author for a thoughtful story.

Playing a game with her life?? Pretty silly.

A fantasy of mine. The closest my wife will get is the negotiation, which fails each time..(The other girls know she is acting.. Since no money changes hands they accept our little game.)

I have succeeded in controlling her wardrobe, the skimpier, the better.

I do like the randomness: sometimes he shows, sometimes not.

And on a realism factor, I preface all my stories whether or not we live in a world that has no STDs. Sometimes yes, sometimes no; and I will tailor my tale to reflect that.