by Daphne123
I love a happy ending (especially one that is this HOT)!!!
Now that was a awesome fantastic fantasy. I couldn't stop getting hard reading thisππππππππ. You definitely have naughty dirty mind with tasteπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏthank you.vi hope you write more like this in future.mmmmmmmmmm I wish I could do that too beautiful lovely slut.
So much fun! Thanks for the story. I look forward to more from you.
They truly deserve each other. Thank you for the series, I really enjoyed it.
Or is it the end? Loved the intensity of Stacy at the convention center. Kind of hard to imagine this happening at the center but the imagination was extreme and well done.
While the beach scene - or another intercourse scene variation - was a so obvious choice that even I guessed it, the subsequent business partnership and telephone call scene was a pleasant surprise.
And overall, yes, bi47's comment is spot on, imho :-)
Thank you everyone for such lovely comments! I'm always nervous about putting up new stories because I want everyone to like them and enjoy themselves. I'm always looking for new ideas too so let me know if you have a really steamy idea for a story.
You write well, and the story keeps the reader riveted. It's silly, of course, but the power of your writing made it work, somehow. It's one of the strangest love stories I've ever come across. Everyone likes a happy ending, but is it really a happy ending for Stacy? Then again, Literotica readers in general aren't worried about the well being of the women characters, now, are they? Isn't Stacy a mere shadow of her former self?
Anyway, Five Stars from me. -- JB
Meeting of their Bodies and Minds! Love the Finish!
Love her and the story. I would vote five stars but don't see the place to vote at end of this story.
Noticing quite a few of Daphneβs stories apparently do not have a link to allow us to provide ratings. Hope website administrators can address this - Daphne is very deserving of all the kudos we can give her!
I am anxiously awaiting whatever you have next? Do you have something coming soon?
I'm working on new stories all the time. I just get busy sometimes with life. I'm trying to get at least one a month out there so hopefully soon. I want to make each one the absolute best I can so you all can get really turned on. I love doing that to you all. :) - xoxo Daphne
I loved it (all 3 chapters), and would give it 5 stars, but there's no rating system for this story. One of the best reads in a long time. Thank You for sharing it with us. :-)
Not that intelligent Stacy if she doesnt know feminism is simply equality of sexes, while lust can be played out based on consensual will and wants of both sexes, though bad treatment of women in sex is what probably she was fighting out, but neither she nor the guy could figure that out, lol.
Apart form this premise, rest of it was great, esp. the ending, though why did he punish her by showing her video to entire batch, just coz she refused to be a whore and sleep around with everyone....seems like equality subject to convenience goes for the guy, as long as she doesn't choose men she wishes to have sex with, everything else seems fine for him and his batch, lol!
This premise could've been put more black and white, probably that she hurt others bad, but must say, apart from the confusing premise, it was a hot story.
Great great story - so very hot. No way to rate it though - deserves 5 stars
Feminism is and always has been nothing to do with equality of the sexes but everything to do with female supremacy. Whereas lust and sometimes the love that comes from it is all about equality because to receive you must also give. This story is great because it shows that in an amusing way with a little bit fun along the way. 5 stars and thank you for the enjoyable read.
@sticks13 - THANK YOU! That is exactly the message I was going for when I wrote this one. - xoxo Daphne
A tease finally broken in. When a woman finally is given so many orgasms by a man she can finally start appreciating him and what they can do for each otherβs happiness.
Great story, I particularly liked the "live interactive artistic statement" piece. That was very creative and well done. I look forward to reading more of your works.
It was awesome and I am soaking wet and craving a good fuckingβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Nicely done, Daphne. A good premise well executed. We're there rating stars available, I would give five wholeheartedly. One of the best I've read here. Now I'm off to check out more of your work.
I have read tons of erotic stories but never of this level of writing. Your stories are very uh inspiring ;) but they also show that you are a fucking good writer. you could make a living out of it.
I would have loved for her to let them double team her, thinking she had been broken for them, only to find out she had actually taken her liberation to an unexpected level where she realized she could use any and every man around for her pleasure. How great if he had become the tortured one having to see her give it up happily to anyone without an ounce of reserve, knowing it would never be just for him and her eyes gazed lovingly on absolutely any man who gave her a fantastic orgasm. After going through all that, having learned how to take her pleasure at anytime under any circumstance, why would she settle for only him and Gavin? I wouldnβt. Gods Iβd love to see him burning with jealousy as his βlessonβ unleashed an uncontrollable level of independence and sense of sexual entitlement in her for real, while his need for her to submit only to him and his whims grows at an equal pace.
Stacy - that's her name - finally learned the simple lesson in the end. And by the way... nice tits. :D
A great ending to a great story. A nice pace through all three chapters. Well done Daphne, and a very deserving five stars!
Gene Moon aka Mooshine57
EXCELLENT ββπββ.
Congratulations on a beautifully prepared and presented work, you have given us a plausible group of characters in a situation that we can all understand, your interpretation of the male psyche is exceptional and your woman appreciates finally that she has both the facilities and faculties to use her own intelligence in her dealings with men, there is no fixed regime in any situation.