All Comments on 'Breakup Remedies'

All exposition? Really? Just didn't feel the story was worth the trouble of writing dialogue and making it seem more real?

Loved it. Commented just to say; sorry other commenter, I loved it being all exposition. I hate talking and it helped me insert myself into the story, made it feel more real to me. I’m new here but this is the best story I’ve read yet :)

I don't find sadomasochism a turn on. Especially, it did not fit the descriptive adjectives on the front page. However, it is generally very well written. Keep up the great writing I saw earlier with kindness, mutual respect, etc.