by Ogoaty
The English as your second language messes with the flow, a lot of wrong words .
I think they did an excellent job, a very good story that I found very erotic for a first timer that doesn't have a good command of a second language. Keep at it, I found the story good and very erotic in spite of the language issues. There are several people at Literotica that can proof read and help with syntax and all that stuff.
Interesting twist at the end. Very erotic tale between father and married daughter. I hope it leads with her Dad impregnating her.