by Sebastian99
I really enjoyed the some what one sided giving of pleasure, usually it's You did me now your turn. Maybe we can see another chapter with these two with leaving it as one gives the physical pleasure. with Mary getting her satisfaction by giving and never receiving
Pappasleaze!
Oh that was beautiful thank you…. Just going for an afternoon nap to re-read 😀I have a feeling that this may become a favourite… exciting and deliciously told.
Beautiful, so tantalizing but a bit repetitive at times. Definitely heart pounding at times. Brings back.... memories. Please write another chapter with Mary finding and receiving her totally just pleasure.
What an amazing story! The lesbian scenes were very erotic and sexy, definitely waiting for part 2!
Would love if you could put more detail in the nursing process (like how Amelia feels her milk sucked out of her etc). Also if Mary decided to induce lactation by having Amelia suckle her in a bdsm outfit and later on milking each other dry, that would be hotttt. Thanks for your time, keep up the good work!
A procedure that took a life of its own. Relatively hot build up considering the bland dialogue. In regards to the end if their one time becomes a regular occurrence then I agree with "That is the thanks her husband gets for being a good and loving husband" - They will become cheating hussies.
God this is hard to read. You can tell this was written by a teenage virgin. They have no idea how bodies work or bend for that matter and repeat themselves way too often because their brains are focused on the intense scenes. Their writing is all over the place with the emotions as well. Jesus Christ dude.
i liked it bro, i'm a sucker for stories that keep it sweet and loving :) keep writing!
Loved it! Tender, loving, and hot! You wrote the scene beautifully! Hope to see more from you!