by shambles
A wonderful and very erotic little story.
Thank you,
Norman
Now THAT was hot! Love the idea of a sister and her friend taking charge of a guy's cock.
the narrative was rushed, the word darling was overused, and the characters had no personification.
Maybe it's the thought that counts...
The writer certainly has a creative mind.
Interesting 4 stars story. A fun read with no character development to speak of.
Bill S.