All Comments on 'Bred by the Hive Ch. 02'

It's interesting, but a bit too mindless and one-dimensional right now: while pleasure and pain provide huge incentives, the story suffers a linear progression of unsuspecting--infect--get more worms--infect--commune--spread more.

Still like it, but hope to see some type of change in following chapters. 4

I'll never look at a pancake the same again, lol. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.