All Comments on 'Breeding Ground Pt. 02'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
Wow

Just loving this, please keep going

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 7 years agoAuthor
Hopefully next week.

Part 3 should be out. Thanks much!

beau6beau6over 7 years ago
Interesting!

Wasn't certain from Chapter 1, but, now it's getting very, very interesting! Keep it up... (uh, no pun intended).

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Glad you are enjoying the story. : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
amazing

This story is amazing, and i can't wait for many more chapters.

Robinius1Robinius1over 7 years ago
Still Liking It

As I said last week - I usually don't go for this kind of story (fantasy), but I'm enjoying this one. Thanks.

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 7 years agoAuthor
Your Welcome....

Part 3 incoming in a few days. Thanks and glad you're enjoying it. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Aghhhhhhh

Clif hanger ending waiting impatiently for the next one!

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 7 years agoAuthor
Part 3 submitted

Part 3 should be posted around Wednesday. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome!

Best story I've read so far in this lit forum! I hope it doesn't wrap up anytime soon, looking forward to many more chapters!

Cheers

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks, but...

Only one more chapter. Glad you are enjoying my little story. :-)

Sybaris_CaesarSybaris_Caesarover 7 years ago
Uhhh

I hope Sara doesn't fuck anyone beside Rick but the way I see, last cahapter would be a no holds/holes barred encounter. BTW awesome plot.

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 7 years ago
THE BEST!

This is a wonderfully well developed plot line, and well executed! I am really getting into it! Can't wait for the ending! Six STARS!

HankVErikHankVErikabout 1 year ago

So the subtle telegraphs from part one paid off, but the mythological turn was truly a surprise. I’d expected it to just be a familial pagan cult, but the mythic elements add a great dynamic.

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