by Passions_Fool
So the subtle telegraphs from part one paid off, but the mythological turn was truly a surprise. I’d expected it to just be a familial pagan cult, but the mythic elements add a great dynamic.
This is a wonderfully well developed plot line, and well executed! I am really getting into it! Can't wait for the ending! Six STARS!
I hope Sara doesn't fuck anyone beside Rick but the way I see, last cahapter would be a no holds/holes barred encounter. BTW awesome plot.
Only one more chapter. Glad you are enjoying my little story. :-)
Best story I've read so far in this lit forum! I hope it doesn't wrap up anytime soon, looking forward to many more chapters!
Cheers
Part 3 should be posted around Wednesday. Thanks.
Part 3 incoming in a few days. Thanks and glad you're enjoying it. :-)
As I said last week - I usually don't go for this kind of story (fantasy), but I'm enjoying this one. Thanks.
Wasn't certain from Chapter 1, but, now it's getting very, very interesting! Keep it up... (uh, no pun intended).