by Depravio
I really like they're doing things together now, and she's supporting him. Loved that combined stroll through the crowd and visiting the monks.
Not a perfect story by any means, but for the hopeful resolution (and it changing Carl), a 5.
Another hot, enthralling installment. This is really just a remarkable pair of characters. I particularly like the way Carl is maturing and using his relationship with Maria to bring up his grades and create a better path for his future. I also love seeing Maria seeing herself as more of an equal in the relationship, even as she submits to Carl physically and even emotionally. And the writing is just exquisite -- and so bloody hot! I can't wait to read it again, especially knowing they don't get caught or anything bad happens to them; I'm too attached to see them suffer! Too much of a hopeless romantic, I guess...!
i love this story!! can’t stop reading it. thank you! -waiting eagerly for more
I love the all three installments for this series! It’s amazing to see the change in Carl’s character as his and Maria’s relationship progresses, and the now Maria sees herself as his equal partner and not just a sex toy. I’m looking forward to the next installment(s)! Keep up the amazing work!
Awwwww..... moarr updatess!!!!!!!!! Hahahahaha web novel vibes. Thank you for your hard work mr. Author ♡ >_<
I'm seriously all about the plot and character development than the smut now. Hopefully, a realistic happy ending is in the horizon.
This was like. 2 on the rating scale early on because Carl was a massive PoS. The writing quality itself is good, but Carl’s early personality ruined it for me. However, as the story has gone on and Carl is maturing and actually truly improving the way he treats her - (with love, care, and more respect) it has made this story basically a 4.5. I’m really hoping that Carl continues stepping up and continues to treat her right and we actually get a happy ending for the. Then it’s without question a 5. Keep up the great work.
Another great chapter. Can't wait till Mother finds out who's carrying her grandbabies. Five stars, and wish I could give more.
Good to see he isn’t treating her selfishly and developing feelings for her - hopefully a happy ending with loads of steamy pregnant sex
This is by far the greatest story I have ever read on here. The writing is amazing in terms of both the narrative and the eroticism. I am both deeply entrenched in the story and deeply turned on, I cannot wait for the next one, I want it to never end
Great accomplishment in wiriting. Faultless.
You COULD do this for a living . . . Although I suspect that you are ALREADY an extablished writer.
I’m very invested in this story, I’m happy I stuck with it. Eagerly anticipating the next installment.
I like the two last installments the best so far, how Carl starts to care and love Maria. I’m hoping she can live openly with him somewhere, and that they’ll be happy together.
I heard chap 4 is going to be bittersweet? Oof, I’ll hold out for the sweet version
5 stars