by yowser
Interesting...It would be fun to know if something else REALLY did happen...think about it...5 Stars!!
What's with all the ball licking? And why was he so quick to get off? You ALWAYS, and I mean ALWAYS, get her off before you do, at least once if not twice. I appreciate the fact that it wasn't another worthless cuck story, but the accolades end there. It was average at best.
Here again, women's double standards! And, like, is her pussy a mile away from her ass? But, for some reason, it does not bother her when she asks to lick her. And from sucking his testicles now will do the greatest favor a favor and an invaluable gift. Oh, women, how insidious you are...
Can we believe Brenda about her and Jon? Did they only talk and nothing more? Why the red herring? It seems to likely to generate a part 2 or alternate ending. Are those going to be the thing now? Glad to see no obvious shenanigans took place in this story. So many questions and a door seems to have been left ajar. If not, then it was a good ending for Brenda and Jamie. - TANSTAAFL
Not quite sure what to make of this,.
And the poor little bitch anon below "Here again, women's double standards!" Bitch she isnt real, but you being a whiny, misogynist, fragile male IS.
Well did she fo the other fellow or not? Plse hurry with chp #2 and let us know if the is bad stuff going on or not! Sounds like a wonderful peaceful story otherwise. 5 stars.
I liked this story, but there are too many questions left unanswered. Did she only talk with his friend's wife and husband? It turns out you've written a mystery.
Wonderful writing. Love the descriptiveness, the characters felt very alive.
this is a very good romantic believable story. A man strong enough to defend his relationship and wife from poachers and taking time to love his woman.
if stays away from men who have lost a wife and are clearly horny.
and less racing more vacations more walks in the woods and more time at home never leave any time when you don't know what's happening.
I love the LW and my liked stories can end up being depressing shades of a bad history. But I live an author who can blend the many risk and temptations of a marriage into a happy ending. But a part two to this could end up badly.
thank you for a creative story that could genarate tons of sequels and alternates. the bones of this story are strong and can only provide inspiration to many. could be the next FEBRUARRY SUCKS by George Anderson
Link to GA below
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2336575&page=submissions
link to February sucks
https://www.literotica.com/s/february-sucks https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2336575&page=submissions
thank you for sharing such a unique story and creative cast of characters
Looking forwards to seeing more of your work and hope you allow sequel id love to see the next challenge for this couple and how long these racing weekends evolve or degrade
Brenda is great. Jaime is a jerk who thinks he owns Brenda, doesn't trust his friend or her, and is selfish in every way.
Excellent story! I grew up in a small town and I feel like I probably knew Jamie and Brenda - likely chatted with Brenda a time or two about what husbands like :)