All Comments on 'Brent's Public Lesson (F/M) Pt. 01'

Great start! Definitely write more please!

on in front of him, she allows herself to be felt up in front of him. Then calls him out over it and humiliates him, classic gas lighting. Men need to stop fantasising about this crap, if being a pathetic manipulated weak person is your fantasy, then get help. Otherwise you are just making yourself a target for a future abusive relationship.

Please ignore the negative comment(s). This is a great story so far and I think it does hit on many things that do happen in the real world, anger, stubbornness, etc and how she decides to punish him was perfect... public but private. The Kate angle surprised me, I thought he was going to have to apologize on a video call but to bring Kate down and put him into panties to further his shame and make him feel as embarrassed as she was is just brilliant!

Keep up the great work!

Wonderful storytelling!

He's discovering things about himself he never knew. So is she. The relationship will never be the same again, no matter how close.

So glad you started writing.

There has to be a second story.

I quite liked it. It would be a bit disappointing not to see Valarie grow into her dominance!!

just sayin

As usual, the woman goes OTT. Best just get dressed, phone an Uber and go home.

She will be nothing but trouble and now she has seen your weakness she will manipulate you for ever.

Stop being a simp.