All Comments on 'Brewery Magic'

You nailed the anxiety side of the story perfectly, self doubt on both sides and being able to power through it... AND a sweet story as well. Nicely Done!

nice to see you posting again

This was written with such honesty from both sides. It’s al ways tough to put yourself out there for fear of being hurt and while they both had many of the same doubts, they managed to stay out of their own way so they get together and hopefully it will be for years since they both feel the same and notice those feelings. This was so well put together and the wording with explanations was the key thing that made it so special for me. Thanks for posting it.

What a really nice story, well written, realistic, no plot holes. Abby and Russ make a great couple.

That was very hot.felt good all over

This is a wonderful story. I love it so much.

My only question is about the P-pill. From the story, I get the impression the genital change is not permanent, just that it might be permanent if not undone within a certain time. How long is this time? Can Abby still change back now if she wants to?

Also, why does Abby not attempt to reverse back when the initial reactions to her genital change were hostile? (Especially since she actually got physically assaulted!) Did some kind of shipping problem prevent her from obtaining the 'undo pill' until it was too late for her to change back? Or was she by then (pardon the pun) already too attached to her cock to give it up, despite everything that had happened?

Once again, thank you ruwild for such a wonderful story. Would love to read a sequel. And hopefully more tales from the P-Pill universe.

What a great story! Feelings and doubts expressed by both people. Sex, romance, and the beginning of a relationship. More please!

Loved it. Loved the writing, loved the story, kept me in it. Loved it!!!

But you let out the most important part: What's her dick's size? -joking joking. I quite appreciate that for once this aspect was left out. For this story it's very herrrrr... fitting?

Great writing :)

Uber romantic. Not the usual faire for this genre, but I like. A lot!

nice to see you postings here again! i look forward to your future stories.

Cannot wait for the next entry to this series! One of the best you’ve done so far. I keep coming back to it.

Thank you.

This story is so wonderfully romantic. The sex was secondary.

Like the premise, like the story, but telling it in the present tense just drains all the dramatic tension. Would improve it 100% just by making it past tense.