All Comments on 'Brian's Loss Pt. 02'

by BigMadStork

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

" "We have a situation. Brain." "

I think his name is 'Brian'!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Mom, a sister's lesbian best friend and two sisters down, plus the scheming Mary Ann.

2 more sisters to go, plus the neighbor & the mother in law.

HighpikeHighpikealmost 3 years ago

This continues to build up as a superb story, thank you. I hope the next part is posted soon.

Very best wishes, G

smltwnguysmltwnguyalmost 3 years ago

I love the story so far. I am impatiently waiting for Mary Ann to get it. Four sisters and Mom, it will be great.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 3 years ago

Again. I love your epic chapter stories. I'm loving this one. Very harem-like.

Please let me ask one way-off-topic question.

Could you refer me to an example of Natalie's angel hair spaghetti sauce?

I'd like to know how to do a sauce that was small enough in texture to suit Angel hair pasta.

For example, would someone just use a food processor to chop up the already cooked ground meat?

MaxGirth69MaxGirth69almost 3 years ago

I am loving the flow. I hope Denise the neighbour gets in on that ride

kalakkalakalmost 3 years ago

Great story, could be a bit less rushed

TheKrrakTheKrrakalmost 3 years ago

The security systems mentioned need to come into play soon, MaryAnn needs to be shown to Brian what a true bitch she is - before she snags him permanently by getting (or pretending to be) pregnant. However her switching to blowjobs may work in his favour.

Looking forward to seeing where this ends up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

love this story I give it a 10 stars

would love to see the women pregnant

and move in with him in a bigger house

goducks1goducks1almost 3 years ago

5 stars. Another great story from BigMadStork!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful story, well crafted and great editing. These are so rare on line; thank you.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 3 years ago
wonderful

i cannot wait for more.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Wonderfully written. 5/5

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

A very good story. Love it. AAAAA+++++

NovemberComingFireNovemberComingFirealmost 2 years ago

Do men actually believe that vaginas don’t contract back to their original size? News flash guys, if it feels “loose”, you’re small. It doesn’t matter how big the dick was or how many times a big dick fucked you, vag is elastic. Otherwise women who gave birth would never feel anything again. Not even bothering to rate this shit

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

It's getting better finally some incest 4 stars

GrandEagle53GrandEagle535 months ago

Does there always have to be one bitchy/bossy sister (Natalie)?

AlwaysAndForever82AlwaysAndForever824 months ago

Dan giving his permission was literally the best part. I need more of Dan's sass. i would also love for the story to continue, he has a harem and doesnt even really know it and that's not even counting Denise.

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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