All Comments on 'Bride'

by MaximillianJr

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is so hot… you should do a sequel of Adair in London

sm1982sm1982about 2 years ago

Great writing and a unique story. I would welcome a second chapter as Anon had commented re Jon’s vision of seeing Adair in his London home..

GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86about 2 years ago

Clearly you've seen Outlander... but it was decent. Well written and orgasm worthy.

AgathaSwanAgathaSwanabout 2 years ago

Any chance Jon could also take Caitlin's flower? I also thought of outlander like other reviews, but I wasn't bothered I think you're story is original enough!

Sunnydaze361Sunnydaze361about 2 years ago

Great story! Hopefully, there’s more to come as Adair goes to London!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This was so good! I would love to read a continuation of this. Jon finally breaking Adair and having him wait for him in his London estate would make a lovely series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Give me more!

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