All Comments on 'Brides First Time'

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AuralStimulationAuralStimulationover 2 years ago

Very sensual and well written. Thoroughly enjoyed this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It had a lot of potential, but turned out to be rather anemic, didn't it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love how it showed what he wanted to do to her, but he valued her consent and reigned himself in.

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Lover of all things dark, sexy and twisted, where a person can lose themselves in another world where every dream comes true. A collection of the stories I have posted come from a book I wrote. It's a book of erotic romantic shorts and has been published onto the Kobo store. ...