All Comments on 'Brief Encounter on a Beach'

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stickygirlstickygirlabout 2 years agoAuthor

This is a story in 750 words, which is a regular writers challenge at Lit. I'll most likely write a more complete version at some point, but it was fun to see how far I could get within the 750 limit.

ElectricBlueElectricBlueabout 2 years ago

Lovely writing, Sticky. I do like the idea of Hannah not being sensible :).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The Best one on this site . some of the 1000 + stories repeat the same sentence a 100 times I liked it

EmirusEmirusabout 2 years ago

WELL WORTH A 5. A really nice, and I mean that in the best possible way, story. Just the right length for the target. I really enjoyed it.

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreabout 2 years ago

5 stars

I think it would have done better in romance.

chytownchytown11 months ago

***Cute read. Thanks for sharing.

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I want to make you laugh and cry by writing about what’s in people’s hearts as much as what happens between their legs: romance with a helping of loving sex. My stories are respectful of transgender people: real people with honest feelings. Thanks for stopping by.