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'Please, that'd be great,' I said as I watched Harry busy himself around in the kitchen.
Harry went to the fridge, pulling out a carton of milk and poured a good part of it into a thick saucepan then put it on the cooker, as it began to simmer he cut up some banana and apple slicing them thinly and checking on the milk. 'You do know there's a microwave for that?' I said to Harry.
He looked back at it, 'Oh I don't bother with them too much,' he smiled. 'Nothing wrong with a little hard work now and again... although boiling milk isn't hard work really,' he laughed heartily.
'You known we have a microwave at work. I only use it a few times a week - to warm up my coffee if I let it go cold, or to warm up a microwave burger I might pick up at the store around the corner from work.'
I listened to Harry talk as he checked on the milk simmering, then watched as he poured it over the porridge oats and stirred them with a wooden spoon he'd pulled out. He laid out the fruit on top of his and passed me mine. 'Your porridge good sir,' he smiled.
I asked if he wanted some sugar or honey. He asked for a little honey and drizzled some on. I watched as he tucked into his breakfast and I did the same. We washed it down with a little orange juice from the large carton in the fridge.
I watched as Harry set off upstairs to get ready. I watched him go then tidied up. As I began to wash the dishes, I could hear the bath being run upstairs. I walked upstairs and looked at my "to-do" list on my phone. I put it down on the drawers then picked up my laptop. I'd done a great deal the last couple of days and was just awaiting emails coming through at this stage. I thought I'd give it a while then check on stuff in a few hours, then chase up matters with a phone call later on to the office.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month ago"She handed me her car" Female or not, that is one strong little police officer to be able to lift a car. Proofreading aside for a moment, 3 1/2 years later, and some of us were hoping you'd have found the inspiration to continue.
tangledweedover 3 years agoThere are really only a couple of story types at Literotica, those written with erotica as the focus and those with literary as the focus. Since this multi-part story was offered up as a "slow-burn" bit of erotica, I want to point out something that seems inherently obvious to the casual observer.
You can pick up a literary story after a break and still get something out of the story. If you are reading erotica for the inspiration to indulge yourself (solo or with partner/s), dropping relatively short chapters, months apart, with no substantial build up in them, you are letting everything dry up and go soft. I don't know if you plan on finishing this story, as it has been months since this last installment, you should recognize it now needs a real blue pill of a chapter to get the blood flowing.
The writing, style and pacing is done well enough to build anticipation for whatever is going to happen, but without the writer's ongoing participation it means nothing. Just my 2 cents for the erotica leaning Literotica writers, your story needs to put out or get out if you want to achieve your goal of hard dicks and wet slits.
jviperover 3 years agoLoving the slow burn. Building the relationships here is the only way to make this genre interesting. Would love to see you follow on that condom hint some more. That's something you don't see much here. Anyway keep it up.
fifteen16over 3 years agoStory is not to slow for me. How people come together and the relationships develop gives a story some realism which many sorely lack. This is not a story where a husband or wife has gone out, had to much to drink and wakes up in a strangers bed. I believe the writer is developing the characters by bringing them closer together which will allow emotions and desires to surface. That does not happen quickly, for a husband to tell his wife he would like to see her with another man is a huge admission , and takes time. If that is where this story is going of course. They might get together and join the salvation army. (smile) looking forward to more>
