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All Comments on 'Brittany's Gift of Submission'

by cliff_edger

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow!

Wouldn't mind my gorgeous wife would give me a gift like this...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MORE!

Please quickly add more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More

Please finish this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
All talk and no action

on and on and on......and no action. snoozer

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This really belongs in BDSM

Great concept and good writing. But since Brittany is consenting to do whatever Jake wants, this doesn't really go with non-con -- unless you plan to have Brittany revoke her consent and Jake to act out his fantasies anyhow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs the next chapters

A well written start to what could be a good story. But without the next days and weeks this is just a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This was amazing!! I can't wait to read more!

CZOFTWCZOFTWabout 3 years ago
We kinda need a chapter 2

You did say it was first in a series so this is really on you 😉

TopcityloversTopcityloversabout 3 years ago

We have to find out Jake’s deepest darkest desires! How far will he take things with Brittany?

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