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by cameronrovigo

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SarcasticSnakeSarcasticSnakeover 2 years ago
Fun little entry into the genre!

A nice short that adapts the classic premise of a stuck-up protagonist being taken down. Good pacing, clean/consistent prose, and good descriptive scenes help draw attention away from a few minor inconsistencies/grammatical errors.

Looking forward to reading more of your naughty stories, cameronrovigo!

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I write what I know and what I want. Hope you enjoy :)